There are many reasons why a reviewer may not like a certain book. For me, there are several, from just not being in the mood of the tone and style of the author, the topic sounded good at the time and then the writing goes into a different path, or it just doesn’t connect with the book at the time reading (there have been times that reading the same book later changes my view). I mostly read my books right before going to sleep, so whatever goes on during the day before that than can have an influence on it. Finally, reviews are just opinions, and I may just plain not like the book, but has nothing to do with the writing or author. I respect how hard it is to have the drive to not only write something, but find a way to put it out to the audience (either self publishing, or finding an agent and company).
Kingdom Come : Finding Holy in the Here and Now ,by Melissa Zaldivar, (Faithwords Books, 2019 ) is a book that did not resonate with me. The book seemed interesting to me at first, with the topic of looking at the Kingdom and Presence of God, how to find discernment between the two, and use it in the Christian walk.
The author defines the Kingdom of God as things that are under God’s rule, whereas the Presence is the reality of what happens when people encounter God. With that said, the writer takes the reader through certain aspects that are needed to know about the two, while encouraging the reader to dig deeper into their own hearts and embrace facts like learning to know God’s timing, the difference between kindness and niceness, finding time to seek the presence, and risk taking.
The writer gives great examples throughout the book (some Biblical ), such as asking how people in today’s society can get into God’s presence when we can’t get off our cell phones for two minutes without checking on it (even if it is on vibrate), using the examples of how blindness is symbolic in the Bible (both spiritual and physical), and how to view the fact that Christians do not let go of things; thinking the worst endings is the result, instead of trusting God.
While these are all great ideas, and written in ten chapters, the beginning several chapters were a struggle to get through, especially the first one, where I would keep staring at the words and wondering what it is I read. Zaldivar ‘s bio states she holds a Master’s degree in theology, which may present the first part’s problem of not being clear cut (at least to me) of the book’s goals. However, once the reader gets deeper into the book, the chapters and points flow nicely, such as the two chapters on risk taking (which is the best in the book), and the chapter on fear with an in depth look at Peter of the Bible, which was just as enjoyable.
Another problem for me is that many of the personal examples Zaldivar uses are vague and tended to turn me off. Maybe this book is geared more towards women, but after every other page of the examples such as ” I was dealing with something at this time of my life” (the quote is mine for example, not the hers), I got bored and agitated. I understand that the reader does not need to have total access about the writer’s life, and some things do not need to be known, which may be too personal for her to reveal, but other examples could be more entertaining and helpful in order for the reader to embrace the theme of the book. Also, after every situation, she writes that she would break down and cry, or give examples of “after this, I ended up crying” (again not actual quote). This may be where the female audience would get more out of the book, and this is not to sound judgmental of the emotions and passion the author has on the subject and her past experiences, but as a stranger reading the book, it, along with the vague examples, took my attention off of the points being made.
Zaldivar’s first book is for a select audience, and not for everybody. Her writing is down to earth and not over the head of readers (with exception of the first chapter which was a fight to get through). Her style is nice, and for a first time writer, she has some wonderful Biblical examples using Judas, Peter, Eve, and Ruth from the Bible, and would been better to use more of these , or use other people’s tales to help out with some of the points, instead of the vagueness of many of the situations. She knows her topic well, and at times, shows the emotion that she wants the reader to experience as well, which would be nice to see more of it to get her point across and add emphasis to the ideas being presented. Besides of these critiques, she will get her following with her writing style, and have a nice writing future if she sees fit.
This review copy was sent courtesy of the publisher.
Kingdom Come: Finding Holy in the Here and Now (Faithwords, 2019) by Melissa Zaldivar ISBN: 978-1-5460-1083-8 (hardcover) , 978-1-5460-1081-4 (ebook) can be ordered at : http://www.faithwords.com
For more about the author, go to: melissazaldivar.com
Geared To: Ages 15 and Up.
For Fans Of: Christian Living, Growth, Christian books, Spirituality, Women Studies